Everything must leave some kind of mark.

Remainder, by Tom McCarthy

Tom McCarthy couldn’t get Remainder published in the UK at first. He eventually sold it to a French house who marketed it through art galleries rather than bookstores. It proved a critical hit and so was then picked up for a more traditional UK release.

I wrote recently in the context of Elif Batuman’s article about how I feel there’s a degree of conservatism to contemporary publishing (of course there is; they’re businesses). Remainder’s difficulties are as good an example of that as any. I don’t wholly blame those publishers for rejecting it though. It’s a disturbing and unsympathetic work richer in ideas than emotion. To be blunt it’s deeply uncommercial.

In the afterword to his Gentlemen of the Road Michael Chabon argued that much contemporary literary fiction fell into a genre of late 20th Century naturalism (and that it was essentially genre writing). I have mixed views on that argument. On the one hand it’s easy to see what he’s talking about. On the other while never as popular authors such as Alasdair Gray, Will Self, Haruki Murakami and here Tom McCarthy show that the literary novel and naturalism are not the same thing.

So what is Remainder? Plotwise it’s fairly simple. The narrator has suffered a terrible accident. Something fell out of the sky and left him in a coma from which he’s only recently recovered. He has had months of reconstructive surgery and physical therapy. Due to brain damage he’s had to relearn how to control his own body; how to make the simplest movements of lifting a carrot to his mouth or walking.

He doesn’t remember the accident itself. In a way that’s a good thing though as the £8.5 million settlement he receives requires as one of its terms that he never discusses it. He can’t discuss it: both legally and practically.

Initially this premise felt a little unlikely to me, but acceptably so. Books often ask us to take something of an initial leap of faith with respect to their premises. Anyone who reads science fiction in particular is used to being asked to give the author at least one or two impossible things before breakfast without quibbling too much. What I had yet to realise was that likelihood wasn’t the point.

Remainder quickly gets into yet stranger territory. The narrator’s settlement is celebrated by his best friend and a woman he knows and was previously hoping to be romantically involved with. He no longer has any interest in either of them though. In fact he finds them vaguely irritating. It’s soon clear that he’s no longer really the same person as he was before.

He’s troubled too by feelings of inauthenticity. Having learned how to do everything nothing feels fluid. He is conscious of everything he does. He reflects that in films people just do things and those things happen; without mess or self-consciousness. When Robert de Niro opens a fridge the fridge just opens. In life when he opens a fridge the fridge sticks or some part of him thinks “here I am, opening a fridge” (that’s not a direct quote).

That struck a chord with me. I live myself in a constant state of self-awareness. Sometimes I go to gigs to see a band I love and while I’m jumping up and down I can’t help observing myself jumping up and down being a person at a gig enjoying a band they love. I’m not really there in the moment; I’m there observing myself being in the moment. There’s a remove.

The narrator complains to his friend that the accident has left him inauthentic; more artificial than everyone else. Unusual. His friend replies that on the contrary everyone is inauthentic. The narrator isn’t unusual, he’s “more usual than everyone else”.

Soon afterwards a chance vision of a crack in a bathroom wall at a party sparks a memory of a time when he wasn’t separate from the world. It was a time when he lived in an apartment and moved through it unconsciously and smoothly. The fridge door didn’t stick. Is it a real memory? Possibly not because he can’t think of a time in his life when he’d have lived in a place like that he remembers, but real or not he decides to recreate it. After all, he has £8.5 million. He can afford to have the whole building recreated together with the view from his apartment window and re-enactors to play the parts of the others he remembers living there.

Other re-enactments follow. He takes quotidian events and sees meaning in them and has them re-enacted in painstaking detail in full-scale replicas of the places where these scenes happened. He employs a large and full time staff and a logistical specialist named Naz to ensure that his re-enactments are precisely realised. He moves into his recreated might-be-memory and has his hired neighbours recreate the fragments of life he remembers from his time there.

The scale of all this is incredible. The whole exercise is incredible. McCarthy approaches it though in a very naturalistic way. The problems of sourcing the buildings, finding the actors, recreating the remembered surfaces, all these are described and the sheer amount of work required for each re-enactment is clearly detailed. Much of the book is the nuts and bolts of these pointless reconstructions of trivia.

There’s a fascination to all this and because McCarthy is a good writer it doesn’t bore. Alongside all this though are more disquieting elements. The narrator feels a sense of euphoria connected with these events as if through them he’s becoming more real. He becomes obsessed with repetition, patterns, systems, communications, and grids. He shows no empathy. He is a monomaniac obsessed with breaking through the shell of awareness that surrounds us all so that experience and action are no longer separate but one.

The narrator becomes obsessed too with the recalcitrance of matter. He wants to be effortlessly in the moment, but the universe makes that hard to achieve. Stuff makes that hard to achieve. He wants to transend the physical but the physical is while the transcendent may well not be. “…physics wouldn’t let him carry out the plan: it tripped him up.”

He’s also not trustworthy. He narrates how when in his coma he dreamt of being a commentator at a racetrack. Now he is awake, but is he? Everything suggests he is (it’s possible to interpret the whole book as a dream or as him being dead and in purgatory, but it’s a tedious interpretation) but he is the only source of everything that is described and at one dizzying juncture he admits that a conversation he just described didn’t actually happen. I was so taken aback by that admission I read it twice. I re-enacted it. I felt a sense of vertigo and uncertainty – what the narrator feels through much the book (or claims to feel).

Later he’s dogged by a smell of cordite. Nobody else can smell it except for one man, but later still nobody else seems to be able to see that man and this unseen person becomes a meta-narrator commenting to the narrator on the narrator’s own actions. Does the man exist? The narrator can see and hear him and early on it seems at least one other person can, but we can’t trust the narrator and by this point in the book he’s clearly mad anyway.

Some books are comforting. Brooklyn was for example. Brooklyn for me was a hugely enjoyable read that I relaxed into. It was beautifully written with a clear and engaging story (if not much plot). This isn’t that kind of book.

Remainder is a novel of ideas. It was clear to me quite quickly that to have any chance of understanding some of what it might be about I had to pay attention much more to themes than to events. I’ve talked about some of those themes here: repetition; the barrier of consciousness from direct experience; the intransigency of matter. Another theme is that of cutting away to the truth of a thing.

Recently I went to an exhibition in London titled Modern British Sculpture. By chance I got talking to one of the curators of the exhibition; himself also a sculptor. I mentioned that I was reading Remainder and it turned out he’d read it too. That’s not as odd as it might be because sculpture too is a theme here. More precisely the cutting away of stuff until what remains is revealed. Michelangelo spoke of the statue being inside the block of marble already. His job was just to cut away the excess material until the statue revealed itself.

The narrator re-enacts experiences but then cuts away at them looking to reveal the remainder that they already contain: the core of the experience or perhaps the act of experiencing. The moment is locked within the stuff, but if the stuff can be bypassed or made to disappear the remainder can be brought into view.

It’s not all flawless. Oddly the book worked least well for me when most realistic. McCarthy/the narrator’s description of Brixton as a place filled with young men dealing drugs to each other didn’t mesh with my own experience of living there and the description of Soho as filled with spray tanned gays doesn’t much match my experience of there either (I spend a lot of time in Soho, spray tans aren’t unusually noticeable). Both are cliches of those places rather than their realities. They’re re-enactments of them which don’t persuade.

Similarly, part of the re-enactment of the building and old apartment includes the view from it of a sloping tiled roof on which cats would lie in the sun. This part doesn’t work out so well as the cats placed on the roof keep falling off it and dying. For me that rang false because cats in fact very rarely fall off sloping surfaces unless they can’t stay on to begin with and anyway cats aren’t killed by long falls – they’re killed by short ones (I grew up with cats, and in fact had one accidentally fall fifty feet from a tower block window onto concrete. It made a full recovery which I later learned was what I should have expected).

None of that matters. The point of the cat exchange is the narrator’s lack of empathy as this shows:

“What do you want to do?” asked Naz. “Get more,” I said. “How many more?” “At a loss rate of three every two days, I’d say quite an amount. A rolling supply. Just keep putting them up there.” “Doesn’t it upset you?” Naz asked two days later as we stood together in my kitchen looking down into the courtyard at one of his men sliding a squashed cat into a bin bag. “No,” I said. “We can’t expect everything to work perfectly straight away. It’s a learning process.”

It’s ironic though that in this least natural of novels the only parts I balked at were those parts most rooted in reality. I noticed once or twice that many of the characters talked in ways that seemed to me more what I’d expect of a modernist novelist than what the characters were supposed to be, but given the general tone of the novel that wasn’t a problem at all.

Other than those rather pedantic caveats it’s also fair to say that the book lost some of its force in the final third and for me went into more conventionally unconventional territory (increased use of violent imagery and images of death which just aren’t as interesting as what’s gone before). The actual ending is very good, as good as it could be really, and there’s still new material of interest but it wasn’t as strong overall as the earlier two-thirds.

I said up above that Remainder is disturbing and unsympathetic. It is. It’s a novel that made me work and I’m sure there’s a vast amount in there in terms of symbolism and references that I missed. It’s dense.

It’s also though extremely good. It’s well written. It’s fascinating. It didn’t just let me sit back and watch but instead required me to think about what I was reading. It’s also quietly funny as it contrasts the peculiar obsessions of its narrator with the reactions of those around him. I’ve not quoted a huge amount in this post so I’ll end with one that I rather liked. The narrator becomes obsessed with cofee store loyalty cards which promise a potentially endless loop of coffee purchases punctuated by free coffees and new cards. Here he realises he’s near the end of a card:

I’d forgotten about the loyalty-card business. Now I’d been reminded I was really excited by it. I was so close! I gulped my cappuccino down, then strode back to the counter with the card. “Another cappuccino,” I told the girl. “Heyy!” she answered. “Short cap coming up. You have a…” “Of course!” I said. “I was just here!” “Oh yes!” she said. “Sorry! I’m a zombie! Here, let me…” She stamped the tenth cup on my card, then said: “So: you can choose a free drink.” “Cool,” I said. “I’ll have another cappuccino.” “On top of your cap, I mean.” “I know,” I said. “I’ll have another one as well.” She shrugged, turned round and made me a new one. She pulled out a new card, stamped the first cup on it and handed it to me with my two coffees. “Back to the beginning,” I said. “Through the zero.” “Sorry?” she asked. “New card: good,” I told her. “Yes,” she said. She looked kind of depressed.

The ideas make this a rewarding read. The wit helps make it a fun one too. It’s never easy but it is remarkably original and it’s no surprise that two books later McCarthy was shortlisted for the Booker (giving hope to rejected authors everywhere).

I was persuaded to read Tom McCarthy by Will over at Just William’s Luck. His review of McCarthy’s second novel, Men in Space, is here. While writing this I also found this interesting article about McCarthy which sheds some light on him and on his thoughts about contemporary UK publishing.



Filed under McCarthy, Tom, Modernist fiction

22 responses to “Everything must leave some kind of mark.

  1. So pleased to read such a brilliant post if indeed I was the person who convinced you to read this excellent novel. It’s one I’m certain to re-read at some point as that idea of authenticity has a special resonance for me with my work as an actor. That idea of trying to find authenticity in repetition is basically what I do 8 shows a week! The self-awareness you mentioned that kills the joy of a gig is also the commenting voice that can mess you up on stage. Stage-fright for many actors isn’t a fear of going on stage but the conviction, when on one, that the audience are watching you thinking ‘He’s not very good, is he?’

    Have you seen the film Synecdoche, New York? It has a setup similar to the narrator’s re-enactments

  2. leroyhunter

    William beat me to it: my immediate thought was of the Synedoche movie.

    To your credit Max you’ve made this sound more interesting then anyone else I’ve read on McCarthy. No doubt he is doing something fairly unusual and challenging in terms of contemporary English writing. I just wish he’d stop comparing himself to Joyce, Beckett etc. He sounds like *such* an arse in his interviews and I just can’t get past that, which is petty of me but there you go.

  3. What a coincidence. Someone just recommended that I watch Synecdoche, New York. Not sure I’d like it, and I’m not sure I’d like the book either. Your review gave me a good sense of the book, but I think the book itself might irritate me.

  4. Excellent timing and an excellent review. I bought a copy after reading C and have it nearby — your thoughts are most useful in alerting me to the kind of mood that I need to be in when I start it. I’m afraid that when I approach works like that described in this review without the right frame of mind they do tend to irritate, if I can borrow Guy’s phrase.

  5. GB Steve

    A really excellent review which made me at once want to read and not read the book, because of what it contains and how much work it might take. I’m feeling, at the moment, that I don’t want that level of engagement with a book. I’m reading Katherine Mansfield and she brings out Life without a fight, or a plot. It seems so much easier. She doesn’t strip away, she shows you what you already knew. It’s not like a chisel, but more an art appreciation class – it was always there, you knew that, here, see?

    That said, I also like the arch and surreal so Remainder will be going on my list of things I might read.

  6. I do know what you mean about the self-awareness.
    I believe you when you say it’s a good book but I don’t think I’d like it. Too complicated for my simple mind.

  7. I’ve not seen Synedoche, New York. Somehow it didn’t appeal but I’ve had so many people recommend it that clearly I should.

    The comments about acting are fascinating Will.

    You did persuade me to read McCarthy. As Leroy mentions McCarthy comes across terribly in interviews and as best I can tell loses readers in every one. I now rather avoid reading what he has to say about his work as it puts me off as well.

    He always gives this impression that if you’ve not read a particular modernist canon you’re not really cultured. As I said in the Elif Batuman comments though there are so many canons. I’ve met people who considered it essential to have read all the great Russian writers. Others who saw the English literature of the 18th and 19th Century as key. Still others with other canons. Nobody can read them all and it’s not blameworthy if someone avoids Beckett and Joyce because they want to read James and Wharton.

    Steve/Kevin, it is a particular mood sort of book. Sometimes I want to be pushed, and sometimes I want to curl up with something that will carry me along. This is very much the former. The Joseph Roth I’m now reading is closer to the Toibin in that the sheer quality of it just takes you with it. I wouldn’t say the Roth challenges me, but I would say (so far anyway) that it’s as excellent as you’d expect of him.

    Despite what McCarthy seems to think there’s no real link between challenge and quality. A book can be a masterpiece and yet utterly accessible. That said, there’s nothing wrong with inaccessibility if that’s the price of the book you want to write.

    Guy/Bookaround, if I gave you enough info to decide it’s not for you I’m pretty happy with that. I’d hate to mislead and have you waste your time with something that you didn’t enjoy.

  8. Max, on the whole canon idea–the important thing is to establish one’s own.

  9. Nice comment Guy. I’ll have to give some thought to what mine is. Chandler and Runyon would both probably be on it.

  10. Great stuff, Max. Remainder was in the Tournament of Books a few years ago and I followed the coverage there. Nobody expressed its essence as well as you have, so I never picked it up. You have me wanting to read McCarthy now, despite his pomposity in interviews. McCarthy owes you a pint, at least.

    I am with you and Guy on creating your own personal canon. It would take some thought. That could be a great post or series of posts for you.

  11. I will do a personal canon post. I’ve been thinking about it since Guy mentioned the idea. As you say though it will take some thought.

    What immediately struck me is how much it has changed over the years. Ask me as a teenager and it would have been almost all sf – guys like Larry Niven and Clifford D. Simak. Damon Runyon and Raymond Chandler are probably the only people I read then who’d still be in a personal canon today.

    What would be interesting would be that I suspect each of us would have very different personal canons. Even those of us with similar tastes.

  12. If you organize a group thing about personal canons with a reasonable deadline, I’m in. I think we’d all have a lot of fun and thinking in discovering all the lists.

  13. My next post will probably be the Roth I’m reading. I was thinking towards the end of this month for a personal canon post though it could come a bit sooner.

    Within the next four weeks certainly.

  14. leroyhunter

    Great idea! I’d be fascinated to see the results. It’s set me thinking as well, and like you say Max the first thing is how much the stuff that seemed eternal, immovable when you were younger has changed (or not?)….

  15. I look forward to your list, Max. I have a feeling it will add perilously to my TBR.

    (Just as an exercise and without publishing it, I think I will jot down some ideas for comparison to your list later.)

  16. LaurencePritchard


    Very interesting review.

    I read it a while back, thought the beginning was very funny, and remember that the ending was slightly depressing, but can’t put my finger on why. Did you get that impression? I did like the book though, you’re right about treating the whole thing in a very matter of fact way.

    I loved Synecdoche, New York. In fact I read Remainder around the time it came out, when people were comparing the two.

    re:stereotypical comments. Did you think that was the narrator’s view, that he is detached, and had a jaundiced view, or was it more McCarthy?

    Have you read C?

  17. The ending is rather depressing, yes, though I can’t really say why without potentially spoiling it (and for that matter without writing an awful lot more words than I already have – it’s quite subtle in some ways).

    The question about whether it’s the narrator’s or the author’s view is a good one. It’s a classic reader error to ascribe to the author a view held by a character. I honestly don’t know. All I can say is that it felt wrong in a way that didn’t convince. Other elements of the book felt wrong and unconvincing within the fiction. This felt extrinsic to it.

    So it may well have been intentional, but if it was it didn’t work for me.

    I’ve not read C yet. This was my first McCarthy. I will read it though.

  18. Great review! I’d been planning to read this for ages, but definitely will now. I love the idea of creating a personal canon, too. It’s difficult to be well-versed in every single canon, and you’re right that there are many different ones. I tend to read quite widely, so have some knowledge of lots of different types of writing but none of them in much depth. By the way I hated Synecdoche, New York! Loved the idea of it, but got very bored very quickly.

  19. I actually did two Personal Canon posts Andrew. It was an interesting exercise which I’m still thinking about in terms of the implications for my reading.

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